‘I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set it free’

A former colleague, an experienced doctoral supervisor, would always advise his students that crafting a thesis was not unlike creating a sculpture. The task is to write freely and once a mass of words have been slewed onto the page, edit them into the desired shape. Writing involves chipping away – sometimes in chunks at other times in tiny tweaks until the angel in your writing appears.

It’s not unlike the process of changing an unstructured interview into a narrative portrait. I was writing the research methodology section of a research paper – to explain how and why the project moved from interviews to portraits. And here it was. We read the transcripts through the lens of a simple linear narrative plot – driver, pivot and settlement – and wove them together to remake a whole. Our task was to listen for rather than to a story and represent (using the subjects own words) the interview as a narrate portrait.

The first treatment – the unstructured interview is richly textured. Every contour of a life is explained in slow deliberate detail. The experience jumps from the page. It is as if you were there.

Fig 1 – Pablo Picasso, La Taureau 1st state, 1945

The final treatment is different. It is clearer. It identifies the defining features and abstracts them. It’s finely crafted. The narrative portrait has a delicacy, a precariousness, and a simplicity. What emerges is both familiar and exotic.

Fig 2 – Pablo Picasso, La Taureau 11th state, 1946

In creating an aesthetic whole narrative portraits blend empirical choices and aesthetic sensibilities; we seek to capture insights and emotion. we develop narratives that both inform and inspire. It synthesises several processes: a) identifying an overall gestalt that frames, focusses and energies the narrative – the driver b) a scaffold that structures the narrative, moves the action and binds the story together – the pivot c) the aesthetic sequencing that provide coherence and unity – a resolution. (Lawrence-Lightfoot, & Davis, 1997, 259)

The Art and Science of Portraiture: Amazon.co.uk: Lawrence-Lightfoot, Sara,  Davis, Jessica Hoffmann, Lawrence-Lightf: 0884177056561: Books

Lawrence-Lightfoot, S., & Davis, J. H. (1997). The art and science of portraiture. Jossey-Bass.

Published by azumahcarol

Programme Leader for the Professional Doctorate, EdD at the Open University

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